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May the Force Be With You!
This time it takes some strength
To open up ones eyes
To see the lie - it's length
And just how many die.
This game is lost at very start
No castling done - it's all
The black ain't start it's white
At very start it's fall.
Mikomi Jade Skywalker©01/03/2014


Комментарии
02.03.2014 в 01:28

Из любой ситуации выходи победителем, любую цель добивай до конца! ~ Пусть всегда будет Тико, пусть всегда будет Дэвид, пусть всегда будет Ричи, пусть всегда будет Джон!!!!!!~
Who is author of this poem?
02.03.2014 в 01:39

May the Force Be With You!
02.03.2014 в 02:08

Из любой ситуации выходи победителем, любую цель добивай до конца! ~ Пусть всегда будет Тико, пусть всегда будет Дэвид, пусть всегда будет Ричи, пусть всегда будет Джон!!!!!!~
Ok)) Usually you just point out copyright rights...
It seems so difficult - rhyme and don't forget about grammar...
02.03.2014 в 08:59

May the Force Be With You!
Never Say Die!, it is not every time that I do it with my verses. But I always write that it is not mine if so. So if you do not see at least words telling you that the author is unknown, link to the source or copywright with the name of the author, that would be my verse. still, thank you for reminding me to put copywright anyways.